一些同学的看法 :
1 我们需要偶像;
2 偶像是我们的榜样,能激励我们努力上进;
3 不少名人是得益于偶像崇拜而成名的。
另一些同学的看法:
1我们不需要偶像;
2 偶像崇拜浪费时间、金钱,影响学习;
3 不健康的偶像崇拜,害人害已。
你的观点?
注意:
1词数120左右;文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2 可适当发挥,使行文连贯。
3参考词汇:偶像—idol; 崇拜—worship Our class have had a discussion about idol worship
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Eddie has lots of hobbies, but he loves baseball best. So it is his 1sport. Eddie plays baseball on a team every year in the spring. He loves to go to baseball2.
Every day when it is3 Eddie's father throws a baseball to Eddie in the backyard. This is the time of day that Eddie 4best. He enjoys spending time with his father and he loves practicing baseball.
Eddie 5baseball cards throughout the year. He and his father visit the 6and buy cards for Eddie's collection. Eddie spends hours with his baseball cards. He arranges them in different 7and trades them with other baseball 8
One day, Eddie's father came home with two tickets to 9the Atlanta Braves play the next Saturday. Eddie was so10He counted down the days on the calendar.
Finally it was the day of the game. Eddie and his father 11 to Atlanta early in the morning. Before they watched the match, they 12 the Braves' museum at the stadium and saw a short movie 13the history of the Atlanta Braves. Eddie enjoyed seeing the museum.
They ate14at the stadium, and soon it was time for the game.
The game was exciting. Eddie tried to 15every move the players made16he watched carefully and practiced a lot, he might just be on one of those baseball cards some day!
17the game, Eddie and his father drove home. They talked about the game. They talked about which 18were the best, and which 19 were the most exciting. Eddie went to sleep that night still 20of baseball. His dreams were filled with images from his very special day.
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注意:
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Last month while I was walking in the street, the foreigner came towards me. She seemed to be losing. She asked me if I could help him. I said yes, but when she started talking, I couldn't understand that she said. I could only say "I don't know", and then slowly walk away. Though I have studied English for six years, but I still can't understand English good enough. I know I'm not interested in English and I've also been very lazy to study it. Now I know the importances of learning English. I've decided change my attitude towards English and work hard on it.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2). 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As Christmas is coming, I plan to buy something for my parent. What I want to give back is a VIP card of a health club but neither of them is doing enough exercise. My father works very hardly as a teacher, spending most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often bury herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on.
I want to give them this card to express my love and thanks for them. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends here. At the same time, I hope that they can take care their health.
随着时间的流逝,这个国家的生活状况变得越来越好了。