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A teenager needs to have a sense of independence in their life to feel secure. To some teenagers independence means a lot to them, and I think that some parents don’t allow their teenagers enough independence.     Independence has something to do with freedom. Some kids are not allowed to go anywhere alone, and the only thing their schedule includes is going to school, coming home, going to sleep, and repeating the process the next day. Parents tend to be afraid that their kids can get hurted if they go outside into the world. But it parents control their kids too much, they may n下面语段中划线处有语病，请按要求修改或指出病因。       ①“唱红歌、读经典、讲故事、传箴言”四位一体的群众性文化活动新格局的局面正在我市形成。创作和发送红色短信已蔚然成风。②通过开展发送红色短信，我们可以③在发展文化和传承文化的同时，进一步提升市民的素质。 ①处重复哆嗦，修改方法是：                                     ②处“短信”后面应加上“的活动”，该句的病因是                                ③处语序不当，修改方法是：