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作文(60 分)题目：因为有你而精彩提示：题中的“你”可以指人，指物，也可以指事；要求：①要有真情实感；②自定立意，自选文体(诗歌除外)；③少于600字；不得抄袭、套作。⑤不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 答案：略解析: 一等(40-36)二等(35-30)二等(29-20)四等(19一0)基础等级40分切合题意符合题意基本符合题意偏离题意中心突出中心明确中心基本明确中心不明或立意不当内容具体内容较具体内容不够具体内容单薄感情真挚感情真实感情基本真实感情虚假结构严谨结构完整结构基本完整条理不够清楚语言流畅语言较通When I was fourteen I was hit by a car and I felt almost senseless from the waist down．I spent the next four years   36  a back support．I began running seven days a week to   37 my muscles （肌肉）．It was exhausting but I   38  before I graduated from high school． When I was thirty-one, I was in   39  car accident in which my legs were seriously injured．The  40  told me that their goal was to get me to walk "__41  " but that I would never run again．Stubborn and _42_ , however, I set out to rebuild my leg muscles to support my knees through my own personalized 43  program． The fact was that it took me two years to learn how to walk and nine and a half years to run again． While on one of my runs, a   44  thought entered my mind: what   45  I could run the LA Marathon? I wanted to know what it felt like to _46  the prized finish line, even if it  47  I had to crawl（爬） across it．I had only four months to get ready．I spent almost all my time training as if my very 48  depended on it——actually, it did．I   49  that if I didn’t train to my fullest, my body would   50  and the doctors’ diagnosis （诊断） would win．I wasn’t about to let that happen．I had a dream: I would run the LA Marathon to achieve one of my life’s greatest   51  ．I trained eight times a week, seven days a week —twice on Wednesdays． Finally, my hard efforts   52  ．I crossed the finish line of the LA Marathon, strong and solid． I’m often asked why I run, to which I always   53  ,"I run because I can．" I   54 myself that the aches and pains I experience while training and racing are  55  , compared to the suffering those whom I admire must bear．This is why I run．【小题1】A, dressing           B．wearing             C．designing       D．decorating【小题2】A．relaxB．comfortC．protectD．strengthen【小题3】A．recoveredB．curedC．quittedD．shook【小题4】A．otherB．oneC．anotherD．some【小题5】A．doctorsB．patientsC．coachesD．pioneers【小题6】A．frequentlyB．normallyC．attractivelyD．carefully【小题7】A．determinedB．excitedC．unsatisfiedD．disappointed【小题8】A．workingB．sharingC．trainingD．walking【小题9】A．suitable       B．reasonable          C silly            D．crazy【小题10】A．ifB．whetherC．unlessD．once【小题11】A．skipB．slipC．completeD．cross【小题12】A．meantB．proved C．agreedD．explained【小题13】A．patienceB．existenceC．appearanceD．absence【小题14】A．suggestedB．knewC．noticedD．declared【小题15】A．look outB．come outC．break downD．fall down【小题16】A．promisesB．reputationsC．goalsD．levels【小题17】A．worked outB．turned outC．paid backD．paid off【小题18】A．reactB．replyC．relateD．refer【小题19】A．showB．askC．remindD．teach【小题20】A．somethingB．anythingC．everythingD．nothing