增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I've been dancing since I am five. My parents, that were very strict with me, put me in many famous dance studio. I must go to dance almost every day, and only rested in Sundays. My parents wanted me learn every kind of dance so that when he owned my dance studio, I could teach other students. I loved dancing or sometimes they pushed me so hard that I hated it. Anyhow, I thanked them for pushing me and make me an excellent dancer. When I was 20 I opened my own dance studio with their help. Now I'm glad to be able to teach different people what to dance.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

    Water is very important to us, without that there would be no life. therefore, some people don't turn the tap off at once after using it. some people don't realize they wash them in the shower too long. Some even threw away bottles full in water. As middle school students, we should make great efforts to save water. On the one hand, every single person's save water is significance. On other hand, we can use the water we just used to watering plants. We shouldn't leave the tap running for a long time while we brush our tooth.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    New college life is approached. I'm glad to hear that there will be six clubs for me to join in. Among those six clubs, the drawing club is my favorite one, that I'd most like to choose. On the one hand, I have been learning to draw for several years, but I hope the club can give me more chance to show my talent. Maybe I can have my own exhibitions and become a famously artist one day. On other hand, I expect to make more friends who has the same hobbies. I think I would have a wonderful college life if I can be a member of the club. I'm looking forward to them.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm glad that I'm getting more interested in English than ever. However, in the past I think learning English was to learn grammar rules or words by heart. I didn't like to read or speak English, nor I willing to talk with my classmates in English. Now with your English teacher's help. I have realized what the skills in learning English are in fact habits. I have begun to enjoy speaking English and communicate with my classmates. I often read some new article or look for some information on the Internet. For a result, I have become more and more interesting in English. And I made a great progress in English.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2)只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In order to enrich our school life and promote our English learning, the English teachers of Grade II organized an English Talent show last Friday afternoon. Despite of the fact that we were busy with our study, we took active part in it.

    The show lasted more than two hours and it was a great success. Different forms of English programs ranged from singing, dancing, short plays, musical plays to English dubbing performances were displayed, which offers us a great visual feast. There were lots of excitement and cheers during the whole process. That impressed us most was the play Snow White. This activity was warmly welcomed by we students, all of which considered it helped to arouse our learning interest. It is suggested that such activities could be held more regular so that we can really combine learning with joy and develop our learning potential.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I am writing to offer my sincere congratulation. You won the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how gladly I am at your success.

    In last few years，you had shown great interest in Chinese chess. You keep on practicing them every day. Not only have you read much books about Chinese chess strategies, but also you have competed on all kinds of Chinese chess contests. Finally, you succeeded in win the online competition!

    I was so very happy that I couldn't go to sleep last night. I'm eager to play Chinese chess with you at the community club, which we'll enjoy ourselves.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ʌ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I still remember the first day I come to this new school. Everything was new to me, that made me realize I was no longer a small child. I had to depend on me. Luckily, I made several good friend. Their interests were similar with mine. I had great English teacher, Maggie. She let me know the important of English. So I decided to learn English hardly. Although it was very difficult at first, but with the help of my teacher, I made rapidly progress. Just as the old saying goes," Where there is a will, there is a way."

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    To be a volunteer is a great pleasure. Last Sunday, I get up early because I was so excited to sleep any longer. In morning, we arrived at the Happing Nursing Home. How happily the old people were when they saw us! Then we cleaned the windows or swept the floor for them, some of us gave some performances to them, such as sing songs and dancing. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, we were grateful for our kindness. From this meaningful activity, I have realized that we are supposing to care for the old. In our daily life, we should offer our seat to them on buses and treat our own grandparents more kindly. I sincerely hope more people will join in us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Now I'd like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we had held a grown­up ceremony for our come 18­year­old birthday. At first we made an promise that as grown­up we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we expressed our thanks to our parents they had gone through hardships to bring us up and our teachers who had been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave them cards expressing their good wishes. Finally we put on wonderfully performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it is of great important for us. I will never forget that day in my life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I try my best put myself in the local culture. The following two ways always make this easier to do this: either you stay there longer or you visit it more frequent. Once you don't regard yourself to a tourist, you will start seeing things in the different way and start experiencing things like a local person. One of my longest trip was recently in Xi'an, when I stayed for a month. As days went by, life moves forward from take long walks to tasting delicious local foods. I'd never been enjoyed these before that trip, so I have decided to go for a much longer stay next time I travel.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My hobby is rock climbing. I've been doing them for two years. In the beginning, I wasn't very good, so I've gotten much better. I started rock climbing in junior high school. On first day, I felt high nervous, so I only climbed low rocks. It was hard, but very interested. So I kept on work, and now I could climb very fast. I like rock climbing because of it helps me stay in shape. It's also a good way to make friend. I've met a lot of people. We climb, but we also hang out and spend time doing another things now.

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I am happy to introduce a Chinese restaurant about you for your birthday party. I go there with my family last weekend. There are several reason why I like it. First, it is located in the city center but Bus No.11 will take him right there. Second, the environment inside is very much comfortable. It is very clean and the atmosphere is pleasant with fantastic music and amazed pictures on the walls. Third, the service there is real excellent. Last but not least, it offers a variety of dishes, who are delicious but not expensive. So I am sure this restaurant would be good choice.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be fully prepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind complete went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, "My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory." Thanks for his advice, I never give up when I do anything.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的次。

删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2)只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last summer, my family spend several days on the coast. Fortunate, the first day we were there, it was such cold that it was not a good day for the beach! We were a bit of disappointed, but decided to do some sightseeing and went to the nearest towns. When we got there, the only thing to visiting was a very funny little museum.It was the collection of the local person from the 19th century. Inside, there were more than a hundred animals from the area, what had been preserved in glass cases. I had never interested in nature before, but at that time I found it much more fascinated than lying on a beach!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号( Ʌ ), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画-横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Nancy, aged 65, is one of my special friend. I like chatting with her but she enjoys my company. We talk about everything and kept no secrets from each other. It's nice of her to give me so many wise advice, from that 1 have benefited a lot. Last Saturday I visited her as usually. When I knocked at the door, there was no answer. Looked through the window, I was shocked to see her lying on floor. Immediately, I called 120. Minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took her to the hospital. She thanked to me for having saved her life. I was happy to have done that.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余 词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."

My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My village lie in the mountains in southwest China. Although the climate and landscape are pleased, people lead a tough life there. At the beginning of the 21stcentury, the government began to attach great importance to its development, under the influence of that, people's living condition began to improve. A lot of roads were built and plenty of trade centers were newly found, which made them convenient to develop economy. What's more, great many students were admitted into famous universities. In a word, thank to the government's support, great changes have been taken place in the past few years. My village takes up a new look now.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My mom, my dad or my friends don't know me as much as one person who I admire a lot. He's my grandfather. My parents are both working busy and I have little chance see them during the week. They left the house at 7:30 every morning and get home around 8 pm. So it is my grandfather who keeps me company. He is the one which takes me for long walks and cycle rides. She plays football with me every Saturday. We share with stories and jokes and spend many happy moment together. If I do something wrong, it is he who saves me from get into trouble with my parents. My life is much rich because of my grandfather.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Paul,

    I really can't thank you very much for your invitation.

    I do want to accept them and take this opportunity to introduce traditional Chinese paintings to foreign friends, but I'm sorry to inform you that I can't. The reason is because I am busy preparing myself for the coming College Entrance Examination. As for the introduction speech, I strongly recommend my friend Anna, that is the most suitable choice to take my place on next Sunday. She begun to learn paintings at an early age and has good knowledge of traditional Chinese paintings. However, her active personality and perfect speaking English will help make your activity a success.

    Sorry again for any inconvenient caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.

Many people may have heard a plant that we call it tortoiseshell bamboo. This bamboo can grow so tall as 28 meters. This particular species are the most commonly used material in China's industry. Before it is planted, no obviously growth occurs for up to five years—even under ideal conditions! Then, as if by magic, a plant suddenly begins to grow at the rate of nearly 70 centimeters per day, reached its full height within six weeks. Besides, it's not magic. The bamboo's rapid growth resulted from the miles of roots it develops during those first five years, five years of getting ready.