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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改: 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents with their trip to the Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, they went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After dinner, I packed the things into the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waved goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏间词符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（——），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11）不计分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I as seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
Ore evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target, Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When talked about my dream. I recalled my childhood, which I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard although I learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually realized sing is my whole life. I like it or enjoy it. I want to stand on an even big stage to sing where not only will my dream be come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer happy and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting us cheer up.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was warm and sunny, so we decide to go for a swim. When I reached to the beach, my friends were already there. The sea was perfect, appearing as smoothly as a mirror. I felt quite pleased with it, and my friends were a little disappointing as they liked huge waves. When we got hungry and thirsty, we bought some hotdog and drinks from a nearby shop. After that, we became energetic enough for a football game. It surprised all was that my team won game. Then we relaxed for a while, sleep on the beach. At about half past four, we packed up my things and went home. We really had fun.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I worked as the home health nurses in the very poor city in Florida. I was often very kindly to my patients, especially the elderly. One Christmas Day as I was cooking Christmas dinner to my family, I thought of some elderly people. They were my patients who always alone at home. So I decide to make more and deliver hot meals to them. I saw my two sons play in the house happily, and I made them stop. And I asked him to help me pack and deliver these meals. As we took the food into their poor houses with no heat, they were very moving and we saw tears of joy in their eyes. My sons learned of something priceless.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear classmates,
It is a pleasure for I to have a chance to make a short speech today. Recently I had found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare some time to take a rest during the day either. They often cannot help fall asleep in class. And some classmates seldom have breakfast, that is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to our health.
In my opinion, it is extreme important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet. We must learn to make a use of our time, and only in this way can we keep fit or study well. I wonder if you agree me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to offer some advices on our winter travel. In my opinion, a one-week trip to a countryside can't be good. The fresh air and various activities will guarantee us a healthy life here.
We may go by bike to enjoy the landscape. During the trip, we can arrange some activities, from what we will benefit a lot, such as playing snowballs, building a snowman, going skating and climb a mountain. We can even invite the local students join us, not only to improve their English but also to deepen their understanding of the countryside. I am confident to establish friendship and harvest happy from this trip.
I would appreciate it that if you could take my plan into consideration.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my school life, a most unforgettable person is my math teacher. Not only did she helped us in class but also after class. I still remember the time that I got a “B” in the final exam. I liked math best and the teacher took pride in me all the time. However, I failed. I felt so disappointing that I lost my energy and patience. Then one day, I happened meet her in the street, and my face turned red right away. She told me not to give up and encourage me to work much more harder. Later, he offered me a great many suggestion on learning math. In addition, she cared for my feelings. Under her help, I made great progress.
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2）只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ladies and gentlemen,
It's my honor to give a speech here. After-school activities play a important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons or develop our personalities.
Mine own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior One, I become a member of our drama club, that I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities organizing by the club, I achieved a lot.
These activities bring me a lot of funs, provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so much advantages shown above, why not to join us at once?
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm worried that you've been addicted to share pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sorts of photo in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, which is very convenient for us to communicate. Therefore, there exist some potential trouble if we overshare. One severe problem is leaking privacy, that may cause economic losses. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortably, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, neither should we post our personal information, or should we blindly add strangers in the list of friends. It's much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercise.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Once, I got lost on a trip. Then I met an old lady and asked me the way.
The lady told me, "Turn left from here until a school, and then turn right from there. Go straight on and you find a place with a crossing..." With that, the old lady thinks for a while and then she said," When you get there, you are not far away from the place which you live. At that time you'd better to ask someone else. Even though I tell you now, you may not remember."
According to the old lady's help, I got to a crossing soon. Then I asked a passer-by there and quick turned back to my living place at no time.
Although it was a minor matter, it influenced me greatly. Now I realize our abilities are limit and many of our problems can't be solved overnight. So we must act step by step, gradually approach the destination.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分 
Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn't know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called Titanic but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took to us about 3 hours to see it. Having seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble and valuable. That's a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be happier!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( 
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I together with several friends went back to a nearby hospital to do some voluntary works. We helped some patients cleaned their rooms and did everything we could serve them. I noticed a little girl between the patients. Though she was weak, but she was lovely and active. He asked to sing a song for us in return for our kindness. Stood in front of us, she began to sing. Great to our surprise, her voice was so beautifully that it fascinated us all. After that, we had the talk with her. She told us that her wish was to become a singer. We encouraged her to follow her dream.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good teachers are like candles that gives warmth and light to students.
Miss Wang is one of the good teacher of mine. I can still remember that cold morning when I was walking to school alone as usually. A motorbike knocked me down and race off. I was left on the icy ground, cried loudly. It was Miss Wang who sent me to nearest hospital. Besides, she went to the hospital to help me with the missing lessons every day. The moment when I think of it, I'll feel warm. But I'd like to be a good teacher like him in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is apparently seen what we are living in a world of advertisements. We see and hear it everywhere. No one can avoid been influenced by advertisements. Radio, TV and computers have made it possibly for advertisements to attract attention of million of people. However, they have become an important part of our daily life.
On the one hand, advertising greatly promote sales; on the other hand, in their efforts to tell people about products and events, advertisements provide us a large amount of the latest information. Meanwhile, to make an advertisement, a lot of people will have to work together. Without the fast development of advertising, a lot of jobs are being created. In the brief, advertising is a prospective business.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the smart phones become increasing popular, more and more young people in China are attracted to it. To ensure the safe of phone users on the road, the first mobile phone sidewalk in China was building in Chongqing. It is divided into two pathways, one for cellphone users and other for those ordinary pedestrians (行人). As for its appearance, different people hold different opinion. Some people think it reasonable, viewed it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. But others considered it pointless. They believe it would be good if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted at using phones.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A group of boys was playing a game around a tall tree. They decided see who was the first one to get to the top of the tree. Their mothers were looking at the children when they played. One of the climber was David. He was a 8-year-old short boy. Nobody thought he would win the competition. Then the game started. All of the boys tried their best to climb as higher as they could. Though they all made it halfway up the tree before David did, but David reached the top of the tree fastest in the end. His mother was pride of her son. She asked him how he reached the top of the tree so quick. David said, “It was easy. The another children kept looking down when they climbed. When they found how high they were, they got scared and were afraid of fallen down. I only looked up until I got to the top.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My daughter and I went to a supermarket where was two blocks away to buy some fruits. While she was queuing at the check-out，my daughter waited on a benches nearby. When finished, my daughter was seated next to elderly woman. I had a talk with her and find out that she was waiting for a bus to go home. I offered to take her home. She glad agreed. It was a nice chance to give up someone a ride when needing. The nice thing was what my daughter and I gained a new friendship. And we promised to visited and have lunch with the elderly woman.
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2）只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处)起不计分。
During the Tomb Sweeping Festival, apart from visiting to tombs, I spend a week helping my family pick tea. It was extremely hard job. I started out with picking early in mornings and went back later in evenings. Which I suffered most was the pain in my back and legs, but it was an unforgettable memory, an experience to remember the hardship of life. Do this job is not easy. Tea is to be picked and then collect together for being processed in a machine. It is getting easy to process tea via machines than by hand. Besides, there is no need to sell tea to factories for money any more. We just make them for ourselves. Chinese tea is nice and I often drink it with great satisfactions.
