增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1)每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2)只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Time flies! It is almost a year when I came to study in No. 1 Middle School. I remember when I first come to the school, everything was new to me. Now I have used to everything here and like my school very much. Asked how I like it so much. I'd like to let you to know I have good teachers as well as a good atmosphere to study in. My school has a long history. Three years ago, it celebrated their 100th anniversary. In recent years, great changes have taken place. Each classroom has been equipped with new multimedia equipments, which makes it possible for teachers to teach efficiently and students to learn easy. In the years to come, a new branch school will be on construction in the western area of the city, which is said to be completing by September in 2018, when it will have a better condition to welcome more students to receive a good education.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than praised by my teacher before my classmates. Never will I forget one experience in an English class last year.
I felt extreme nervous the instant the class began. Mr. Zhang might announce the exam result and I would probably get scolding as before. Surprisingly, when entering the classroom, he glanced at us, saying gently, “Today, I won’t talk about the exam, but I am excited to tell you what Li Jia wrote an excellent English article in the exam.” At hearing what he said, I was so excited that I couldn’t hold back my tear. It was the first time that I have got praised. From then on, I fell in love with the English. I’m grateful to Mr. Zhang. Without her praise, I couldn’t have gone such far in my English study.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2).只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was an art festival in our school last weekend. It had been held for five years and our headmaster plan to make it a feature of our school. I was so excited, for it was first time for me to join in.
Early in the morning, there were such many people coming to our school, made it so lively. The students gave a warm welcome to the guest. I walked around or appreciated the paintings. All the works were from the students and I was so impressing by them. There were also some handcrafts, that were so creative. Though we were busy with our study most of the time, but some students still managed to develop their hobbies. I should learn to them and develop a hobby as well.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am good at English and always get high marks in English test. Last month, an English speech contest held in our school. I take part on behalf of our class. Proud of my excellently English, I ignored my teacher's advice but didn't prepare for the contest at all. The important day came in. When it was my turn, I walked onto a stage confidently. However, the moment I saw the speech topic, my mind went complete blank. I was at a loss for words because I knew something about the topic. Filled with regret and shame, I learned a good lesson: pride comes after a fall.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Editor,
I'm the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example, when I ride my bike, my parents won't let me ride by myself. They are afraid of I might fall off my bike and hurt myself. Instead, they are taking great trouble to support a bike, with my mother even carrying a first-aid box. I'm not free to ride and I often say angry, 'Why not let me ride alone?' Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything for his children. This does no good on them. Too much love from parents may prevent children from become independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they should do alone.
Yours,
Alice
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park near the school. Can you guess that we did there? We take part in a volunteer activity. We reached in the park at nine o'clock and then we divided into three groups. I was in Group Three. All groups had different tasks. Group One planted trees. Group Two picked up rubbish leaving by the tourists and cleaned benches. A group that I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's House. All of us worked hardly. Before noon, they finished working. Each of us felt a little tired, and we were happy because we had done a good deed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mary,
I'm writing to tell you anything about my school. Xinhua Middle School in which I am studied is wonderful! Look at a picture here. This is the gate of our school. The campus of the school is also very beautiful. I will never forget the day that I arrived. The teachers and the schoolmates were so friendly for me that I felt at home right away. Now I'm happily here. The teachers are all kind, patience and energetic. I'm getting well with my classmates. Next time I will send to you another postcard of your teaching building where I will study for three years.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Learning English is of great valuable. English is widely used all over the world. It was often used in the international meetings. Most business letters are writing in English. With a help of English we can learn modern science and technology from developed country. We can also introduce our achievement and experience to other countries. Because its importance, English is a requiring subject in high schools and colleges. Now many people are working hardly at English. It's very important to learn English well. Unless we learn English well, we can not serve for our country better. So I suggest most Chinese learned it well.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thank you for your letter. To tell you the truth, I've thought a lot of about whether you should buy a laptop help you with your study. In my opinion, you'd better not. For one reason, it's very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it, such as playing computer games, see movies and so on, which will be a waste of time. For other reason, buying a laptop don't mean you can study well. If you want to make a progress, you need to put your heart into your study but work hard. Whether you had a laptop or not is not the most important. Do you agree to me? Looking forward to your reply!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It's been a long vacation. Last month, my aunt and uncle returned work, so they needed someone to look after their child. I offered to give them the hand. I had thought I was able to do that but things turned out so differently.
First, they fought from time to time but I couldn't stop from it. Then, the mess they made really annoys me. At lunchtime, I was busy preparing food while screaming to stop them beating each other. I wished I have not made that crazy offer. To her great relief, my grandma came that afternoon, which meant that finally I was able to go home—after cleaning up the garbage everywhere and collected the toys on the floor. How a busy day!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Last Wednesday our class organized a environmental activity whose theme were "Join Together to Build a Civilized City" in a community. The students divided into three groups. We Group One went from door to door recycling the using things. The second group had cleared up the posters and advertisements on the walls as good as the rubbish on the ground. The last group handed out the magazine of the environmental protection and we also invited the residents to take part. The local praised us with our practice and gave us much appreciation，it made us all feel happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I went to a shop to have my watch repair. After checking the watch, the shop assistant said she would call her manager to see that if this kind of problem could be fixed. As I was waiting the response from the manager, I saw an old man in a wheelchair roll himself over to the counter. No one seems to have noticed him, so I went over to his wheelchair and offered to give him some helps. Kindly as I was, I found that I could do something to help him. At that moment, the assistant replied that it would cost myself much money to fix this problem. I was very sad and about to leave the shop while the old man said, "You are a nice and thoughtful boy, but I would like to help you pay for it."
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear students,
I'm writing to call everyone to concentrate on the problems of the environment.
Over the years, we have come to realise that we would have made good use of energy. Our environment is getting worse and worse. We must take effective measure to protect the environment. We should get into the habit of being environmental friendly.
Firstly, we should go to school on our foot or by bike as possible. Secondly, we should turn off the lights when we leave a room. Lastly, developing the habit of save water is also important. As we all know, nowadays a lot of people are healthy because of the seriously polluting environment. So let's take steps in our daily life. Remember, actions speak loud than words.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, sixty students from our school pay a visit to China Science and
Technology Museum. The museum, which main task is to spread the knowledge of science and technology, covering an area of 48000 square meters. The moment when we entered the museum, the exhibition caught their attention. In the museum, we saw the latest progresses in science and technology. Moreover, we did an amazed scientific experiment by ourselves. What appealed us most was the 3D film that made us feel we were in real events.
Though the visiting time was slight short, we gained a lot. It is so an instructive activity that we hope more will be organized in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(）划掉。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2）只允许修改10处，多改（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a child, I was interesting in everything about the universe. One day I spot a picture of Armstrong, which was the first astronaut to set foot on the moon. Inspired by his story, I made up his mind to become an astronaut but dreamed of going into outer space. After know my dream, my father kept on encouraging me to follow by my heart. Besides, he advised me take exercise for 60 to 90 minute a day to keep fit. With the encouragement and support of my father, I was confidence that my dream would come true.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; .
2）只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Mother's Day we can show our mothers our thank. Last Mother's Day, I had the good time with my mom. I got up early in the morning and cook a delicious breakfast. My mom said it was a wonderfully breakfast. After that, we went to the park and took on lots of pictures. The sky was blue but the air was fresh. We rented a boat row around the lake. At the end of that day, I said to your mom, "Thank you, Mom. I will love you forever." What happy she was. I hope every mother can spend a pleased time with her beloved children.
增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改；在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is agreed, people should read selectively books, especially when they are young. However, many parents forced their children to read all kinds of books, that makes kids under great stress. Actually, children should read books which can help us develop a good viewpoint about the world. Even as adults, we should select of what we read as well, so our energy is limited. Moreover, we need to read to learn some knowledges helpful for our career. Nowadays, people feel most stressful than before, so we can choose entertaining books.
All in all, as long we attach importance on selectivity and universality when reading, we can gain a lot.
